Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Observation

I see your eyes,
I see you draw,
I see you cry,
I'll watch you thaw.

I see your ring,
Your everything.
Then I see you smile,
It's worth my while.

I see these words,
I see them all.
I put these words
In lines so small.

I see this poem in my head,
Although I can't see where it's going.
I try to build on what I've said,
This, I find annoying.

I notice things that are hardly there,
But they are, so yeah.
Those little details; You don't care,
But I do, so ha!